Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Presentation and Feedback of Visions and Nightmares

Post no. 9

okay, so this is my finished product of from the Visions and Nightmares assignment.


I figured that since the majority of the content consisted of nightmares, I might as well focused on it. Therefore, I scratched out any 'visions' that I had mentioned.

Feedback before this output:
- to make the script more poetic
- put more emotion into narration
- remove the brown long thing at the last panel
- adjust fade in and fade outs with with the Tsunami panel

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